WALT: Write for entertainment.
Oh, that’s good, No, that’s bad. 
One sunny evening Jean and George decided to go for a walk with their dog Coco. They decided to stop and buy a vanilla ice-cream each.
Oh, that’s good.
No, that’s bad.
When they walked into the shop they saw the ice-cream cart which was full of maggots and flies.
Oh, that’s bad.
No, that’s good.
There was a new ice-cream shop down the road about 20 metres away with new flavours of ice-cream.
Oh, that’s good.
No, that’s bad.
When they were walking a huge UFO came down from space and took them away to a deathly, dark land.
Oh, that’s bad.
No, that’s good.
When they were about to land at the deathly dark land the UFO started to splatter and explode so the UFO fell back into earth and Jean and George were saved.
Oh, that’s good .
No, that’s bad.
Jean and George started to walk to the ice-cream shop again and saw their 2 friends but not as their usual selves, they were monsters.
Oh, that’s bad.
No, that’s good.
When they started to chase them Coco came and bit the monsters and they turned back into their normal size and shape.
Oh, that’s good.
No, that’s bad.
When Coco bit them Coco then turned into a monster and started to run after them.
Oh, that’s bad.
No, that’s good.
While Coco was running after Jean and George he slowly started to turn back to normal.
Oh, that’s good.
No, that’s bad.
It started hailing rocks with hot lava around them so they all had to run for their lives.
Oh, that’s bad.
No, that’s good.
It turned out that what looked like lava covered rocks actually turned out to be bubbles with red dye covered over it.
Oh, that’s good.
No, that’s bad.
When everyone came out to play they all got bubble mixture in their eyes.
Oh, that’s bad.
No, that’s good.
Everyone went inside to find shelter and the red covered bubbles changed to chocolate. Every kind of chocolate.
Oh, that’s good.
No, that’s great.